The task-
We were give a preliminary task for media where we had to
create a short 30 second video clip. Which involved having one 180 degree shot
which was to show that two character were talking, a match on action. Our video
was based around two female characters, who were having a conversation about killing
someone. 4 lines of dialogue were used in order to create suspense for the
audience but also created an enigma. A male character was placed under the
table with a hood covering his face until the very last scene, where the hood was
removed to show the character with his eyes closed to show the audience that he
had been killed.
WWW-
Our media production was overall based around creating an enigma
which we felt had shown to be successful due to the suspense that was built up
through the use of shots. The 180 degree rule was shot correctly which means
that the shot made the two females characters in our production look like they
were talking opposite rather than next which is what happens when the rule is
broken. During our planning we had decided that we would have a range of shots
but only use ECL(extreme close-up) when needed for example during the first
match on action shot which was to show the door being opened and also the
second match on action shot where the hood was being removed to reveal the character.
This was done to ensure that we were able to create suspense throughout but to
ensure that it the clip remain as enigma but also leave the clip as a cliff
hanger as the audience want to know more. Facial expressed were crucial to our
production also during the scene before the third character is introduced, the
first females character ask “where is he?” The
second female character then replies by the facial expression and movement of
the head in the direction of where “he” is. This continues to create suspense
become only a little information is being revealed to the audience which is
that they now know it is a “he”. Finally a fade was the only effect used in the
ending of the last scene which was done to show that one scene has finished and
another was about to happen however the video clip then end this then created a
cliff hanger which keep audience hooked on and want to know more.
EBI-
During the 180 degree rule too much background was revealed
which meant audience lost focus from the main characters and started to observe
the background. In our real production as a group we would ensure that characters
are placed close together so that they fill up more of the frame, one way this
could have been done is by taking one of the tables out to reduce the distant
between the characters. The lighting conditions of the room were not very good
to much light was used which made did not help the suspense of the video clip,
this meant that the video clip did not look as professional. Also another thing
that we could have added is maybe blood to the scene to help create more suspense
for example show drops on the table or on one of the characters face and hands
which would help build the suspense. Also a better range of camera shots could
have been used such as a tracking shot showing the females character going from
the chair under the table which would have helped to create more suspense.
Mark: 6/10
ReplyDeleteGrade: B
WWW: A good, in-depth analysis with confident use of media language - well done!
EBI: Your written English needs to be a little more accurate for the top grades in A Level Media - this will be an important area to focus on as you go through Year 12 and 13. I agree with your EBIs but you could perhaps have made more of the framing issues - that is the key area to focus on improving.
LR: List three things you will do differently when it comes to your main coursework having completed this preliminary exercise.
concentrate on the framing within my production
ReplyDeletehave more accuracy in my writing, such as spelling and sentences
use more media terminology and theory's